Waking up Monday through Friday at
6.00am to catch the school bus was difficult sometimes. Even just going to
school so early just to sit in class all day, but some days I would love it.
Every kid has their own school experience; it could have been bad or even
good. My personal experience was both:
good and bad.
For the
sports at school that I played was basketball, and cheer leading. But out of
both sports I chose basketball the most. Having so much time into both sports awards
have been giving to be over the course of seasons. When I was I 6th
grade I tried out for the middle school basketball team and I made the team
with all the hard work I put in. We had such a great season and a great coach.
The next season that came around they hired a new coach, and I knew the coach. She
was my best friend’s mother. I’ve been on her basketball team for the town to,
and since I was on the basketball team last year your more likey to
be on the team again. So the day of try outs came I worked really hard to make the
team. The coach posted the list of who was on the team, and my name was not on
the list. My whole basketball dreams were crushed as a kid. Having that said my
grades from there just shot down because my grades were always so high so I could
play basketball, and I was so crushed I just gave up. So when it was time to
move up to the high school I was scared to try out for anything. So what I did
was tried out for cheer leading and I made the team. I cheered for two years
until I had gotten into some trouble with my parents. They told me I couldn’t cheer
anymore. So I tried out for basketball the following year. I was so happy that I made the team I
had good grades all through high school.
There
were two teachers in my life that helped me so much just to get me through school.
The middle school teacher was Mrs. Fernandez. My all-time favorite was Mrs,
Hurley. They both always made sure my grades were high. But when they got low
and started to drop they would always be on my case about getting them higher. I
could talk to them about anything that had to come to mind. If i needed someone to talk to they were there like my bestfriend would be.These two teachers were always at my iep meetings. They have helped me progress so much.
Having
an iep in school can be a tough thing. I’ve had once since day one of school. I
was always nervous kids would me front of me because I had one. Having one made
me think that they would think of me different. I would have to get pulled from
classes to go to special classes were they helped me with a subject I was struggling
with. It would embarrass me because the kids would always ask me why they take
me out of the classroom. I would just tell them I needed to finish a test. As a
kid it had always made me think I was a dumb kid because no one else was
getting taken out of the class for extra help. But now I look at it as me need
more help with my studies no big deal. So it was hard for me as a kid. The iep
testing was a pain. The test I felt were pointless to do but yet it tested my ability
for certain things. Having an iep was good because it had helped me get through
school with that little extra help that I needed. The accommodations that I had
were great.
In
school having a lot of friends was the coolest thing in school. For me I got
along with a lot of people but didn’t care how many friends I had. I would get
comments about how I had a iep from kids, but I really didn’t care what they
had to say. All I needed as friends was my best friend’s. Having seen other
kids get bullied was horrible so I would always stick up for them when I see
anything like that. That was always my weakness. Every student should have a
good school experience with accepts of some bad times.
To Conclude my school experience was good and bad. I still enjoyed it, and my memories that i had at school. I wouldn't take anything back through my school experience!
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ReplyDeleteThe main point of your essay is your school experience, which is great. I think you should try to narrow down to one particular school experience though. I enjoyed reading about the basketball portion, it expressed your feelings. I would maybe add some dialogue. Maybe ask yourself the question what were my feelings during tryouts? I liked the line "my basketball dreams were crushed", expand on it. I liked how you tied it into how it effected your grades, but again I would add more details.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Jessica that you need to narrow this down considerably. You have lots of possibilities here: basketball (which would have many possible essay ideas in it, I imagine);one of the two teachers you mention (I'd decide on just one for a particular essay, unless your point is that they helped you in *different* ways maybe); something about your iep, its challenges and benefits; something about social issues in school (such as bullying). With any of these general topics, though, you'd probably want to center on a specific incident (or several incidents) so that you could really *show* the reader what your experience was like.
ReplyDeleteI'd be glad to talk to you about this, or any of the tutors in the Writing Center could help talk you through things to come up with a more specific idea/topic to write about.